toodle,+Trey

Dear Ms. Justice
==I feel that my writing has improved a little I have always been able to write a alright story but after you have shown me how to set it up a break it into pieces so when I get ready to write it I can just flow all of the story into each apropriate spaces.== chapter 4 summery Chapter 4 summery In this chapter they were going through medical examinations and dental examinations and he had gold caps in his mouth and this man wanted them and he wouldn't give them up because he wanted to save them just in case he escaped the camp he wanted to be able to pay for things and the way they got the tooth out of his mouth was by cutting it out of his mouth with a nasty spoon and he had to sit there in all that pain. And the summer were coming to an end. Auschwitz Trey Toodle Auschwitz is cruel because of the people that were running it because they took rights from innocent people that weren't involved with the war and they didn't deserve to have the right to speak, eat, sleep,and work when they wanted they were innocent prisoners of war and they one by one they killed for nothing because they couldn’t move as fast as the guards wanted them to. They were forced to watch the ones they loved and adored walk into the place they would never walk out of and they had no choice but to accept it. And if they were lucky to make it though they had to suffer with watching the surviving love ones die. Chapter 3&4 summery In chapter 3 it talks about how they were being taken from their homes and how they were taken their belongings with them on the train. And Elie and his family were being taken to Auschwitz and when they got there there was a man there telling them about how to survive in the camp. The guy told them to tell the SS officers that their ages were 40 years old and 18 years old. When they arrived they saw the furnace and people being marched into it, and the soldiers had trucks loaded up with babies and they unloaded them into a ditch if fire. The Germans tried to instill fear into the hearts of the Jewish prisoners by marching them as close as they could get to the fire and at the last second gave them the order to turn a different direction. They were told to go into the barracks and when they got there they were told to strip down and to keep nothing but their socks and shoes, after that they were told to rotate to different stations they were shaved, dipped in disinfectant, and then given a shower. After they were told to go to the medical station where they were asked if they were in good health. They were put to work Elie asked that he not be separated from his father and his wish was granted. The reason that some of the children were fed was because there were some guards that were child molesters. Drunk Driving

When I was in the seventh grade I was hit with one of the scariest situations in my life my uncle was hit head on by a drunk driver. I always heard about drunk drivers and how drinking and driving kills thousands of people each year, but I never thought that a member of my family would almost be one of those people killed by another persons bad choice. Not only was my uncle seriously injured but the drunk driver was to. He suffered from internal bleeding and almost did not make it, my uncle had a few little things that turned into very serious thing like: his jaw was broken, he lost a tooth, his knee was gashed open, and he had a blood clot in his foot. Drunk driving is not only bad it's life changing it effects the life of both the drivers and their families, that night I was to nervous to sleep. That morning I was to nervous to even ask how he was doing and when I finally built up the courage to go see him I could hardly look at him, he was in pain and you could see it in every move he made. The one part that got to me the most was the fact that forever my uncle will wear those scars that night gave him, forever he will be reminded of those head lights. Its not worth the pain its not worth the time in the hospital and its not worth the time thinking about the worst. The people who drink and drive don't think about the person or their family when they get behind the wheel, They thing about the pain they cause and the lives they ruin and they say how sorry they are but it won't change anything.

Homosexuals I honestly dont think that Jamey had a good logical reason to kill himself. It was his choice to display his chosen lifestyle, and private information to where the opinions of others could personally affect him. Jamey made choices that many people, including myself don't agree with, but it was his right to make those choices, and not feel inferior for them. Although it shouldnt matter what anyone thought of him, it unfortanatly did. He knew that there were mean, and cruel people in this world, but he still choose to inform people on how he likes the way he was. I think that if people would mature and not just see that a guy likes guys, but see that he is a person with feelings, maybe then this world would be a better place. I also think that some homosexuals push their beliefs too far on other people. They don't seem to see that everyone doesn't think like they do. They feel like its ok, and that it's not wrong, and it should be paraded. It shouldnt be paraded, it is wrong, and its not ok. People that are straight and are slightly immature feel that they shouldnt be like they are and I think that they want to change them by bullying them because they think that they will see it their way and change and they dont, and when it gets a little more intense and then the homosexuals feel that it will go away if they kill themselves. It's not a fair world, but either way words shouldnt hurt but unfortunately to most they do.

Chapter 5 summery Toodle In chapter 5 it was about them going through a bunch of medical test and was being asked if they were in good health and if they were marked down as not having good health they were going to be sent to the crematory. And Elie was scared that his number had been marked down and so his friends had told them that it hadn't and so he met up with his father and he thought he had passed to and the guy that was in charge of his block told them that the ones who had their numbers taken down weren't in danger of death and Elie hurt his foot had surgery and then they were told that they were going to move out of the camp and the ones that stayed in the hospital were freed two days later. My thoughts on the video Trey Toodle

My thoughts on the video was how honestly brutal Auschwitz was and how they treated the Jews from the time they arrived to the time they left and it is amazing how Elie Wiesel survived the years that he was there, through his father dying and him seeing all of the brutality the Germans severed to them I mean they had to fight each other for food and they had to sleep on a wooden bunk with sometimes if you were lucky straw but other times just the skin you were in had to be the thing that you relied on for comfort and it is really crazy that Elie didn't just brake completely down when he went back to that place he is a very strong individual and a very forgiving person and it shows the man that he is because most people wouldn't have nothing to contribute to the world after that experience and I am truly thankful that he wrote the book __NIGHT__ and sharing his mind and heart with us because all of the hatred that the Germans showed I don't think that I could do it.

Trey Toodle

In this story I think that it is more funny things and more good things happening in this one like they had food and water things the Jews in the holocaust had to fight for save and cherish like it might have been the last piece of food they will every receive and these guys got warm rooms with nice beds with nice mattresses and stoves and what not but the Jews in the holocaust had wood bunks in barns that they had to share with two other guys and on a good day they might have straw laid in the bunks the Jews had to fight each other for the little food they received they had to kill each other for a few moments of hunger fulfillment and these guys got to work for a few hours and they got their food and and they got their baths and they went to bed and some what loved life and they prayed for freedom and the next Saturday they were being asked a few questions and they were gone the Jews couldn't complain they couldn't speak unless spoken to and these guys quit to a break said they couldn't work anymore and got a little pop on the head while the Jews would have had the pleasure of being shot or hung. These guys got to go home and see their families again they got to write to their families they got packages with chocolate the Jews had nothing but the images of the ones they loved burning the sight of babies being thrown into fire pits. These guys lost 600 men the Jews lost thousands and to me that's a few of the reasons why I think these two stories are way different.

Trey Toodle Fire They saw the Germans burning babies in the fire and that makes him kinda loose a little bit of his faith. Seeing that would make anyone kind of dout that the person they are tought to love and to honor and respect and to make the center of their world loves them. Eli Wiesel and Oprah Auschwitz notes What did you learn from watching Wiesel and Oprah walk through Auschwitz?- I learned that it was the biggest and brutal-est camp and place on earth I really can't tell the difference between that camp and hell. 75O% of the Jews sent to their death on arrival.

What surprised you?- The fact that people could be so evil, so non-human to a massive amount of people because a insane man said that it was right.

Describe Eli did his demeanor surprise you? Why or why not.- Yes it honestly did because he was so calm I could tell that it was still affecting him.

they put the suitcases the Jews arrived with in a glass for all to see.