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=Trey Portfolio=

I think I am at a middle point in writing I believe that I as a writer get a good point on the topic I write about and explain how events happen. I will always stay on topic but I think I need to use more descriptive and words that draw people attention. Also I need to work on not using so many articles and I need to stick to the effects on what I write about give more details and extend my vocabulary. I want to mix up how I talk about things be more creative and dramatic. Most of my writing I need to start organizing in steady of having things all over the place like when I wrote about the writing prompt school uniforms I stayed on topic but had my effects all over the place. When I am writing I brainstorm and think about what I am about to write I clear my mind and then think about details I already know about the prompt it like if the teacher told me to write about my life I wouldn’t have to brainstorm because it's my life and I say to myself who knows my life better than me and then I start from my childhood to teen hood then to adulthood. So the main thing I am good at is brainstorming and using enter motions in stories so I can make the reader relate to what is happening in the story and them to have a emotion to an relate to the character of some type and the attitude he or she caries. I need to improve on my grammar and spell check because some time I be placing words in the wrong place and leaving letter off word. Most of the time I like to abbreviate words and not spell them out I also use a lot of onomatopoeia which I can't use unless I try to use my terms writing but I need to use them in a prospective that the teacher can understand how and use them and do I have the correct definition of the term. I also need to expand my writing and writer bigger and not so small that the teacher cant see what I am writing then again also staying on topic and not writing briefly and adding more details to my writing. In the future I plan on writing with more descriptive and educated work like just say what comes to mind and make sure my punctuation are in place. I will try to just stick with one reason on why I am writing about and give more details and thesis and draw attention to the audience and making sure that the reader get a good understanding on why I am writing about what my topic and try not to make my writing intrusting and not boring just humorous and something that you can get a good laugh out of. = This I believe essay = I believe what5 goes around comes around because if you talk about some body and threaten them most likely someone will do the same to you. The world is surrounded by hypocrite and people who love to hate on you and they want everything you got basically they envy you another were for jealousy that means they will do anything just to bring you down to a low level were they are. When your life starts to fall apart that is how you that karma has found you and will haunt you until you learn to change your ways so you look back on things you do and you try to do good deeds and hope you will fall on the right track but if you keep thinking the worst of everything then you may see bad things everyday. The point is that you shouldn’t talk about someone unless you look at yourself.

About me essay
Hey my name is Trequan Deonte Berger born on august 31, 1994 in new bern NC. I have two brothers and one sister my sister Marquita is the oldest then my brother domonique,then me and my little brother duan. I like to run and listen to music for my free time and just relax. My favorite food is lasagna because I like Italian foods. After high school I plan on going into t he air force to work on engines for different technology I had this plan since last year and so far im sticking maybe. Well also I am quiet at point when I am im thinking about something I could say or I just don’t want to talk. =Drunk driving Effects=

**Addiction to Alcohol** When you drink alcohol and driving you have major consequence to face when you are caught drinking and driving. If you are addicted to alcohol you should check yourself into a rehab facility where you learn to control your addiction to alcohol and to find out what alcohol does to your body. Alcohol work in a cycle that is so powerful that it is hard to break. The reason for rehab is to get to the heart to individuals and why they have become addicted to Alcohol and how to treat the issues while at the facility. Alcoholics mostly gets off the addiction in the rehab facility because they become healed,healthier living and they let out their emotions instead of drinking their life away. Addition also tear families apart because if someone in your family is addicted they may abuse you or hurt you. **Hard to function while drinking** When you drink to much alcohol it can cause serious damage to the brain and loss of memory. If you take five drinks to the head straight you will start to feel a certain way because the alcohol is so strong and has a good percent. The brain precede less oxygen and the nerves are attacked. Also drinking heavily can cause you to have a accident linking to falling off something like stairs. it can cause severe head injuries. sometime you can have tissue removed from the brain which may cause you to have short term/ permanent memory loss. the brain is the most important part of the body that needs oxygen and blood flowing to it. Also drinking effect families and friends because when you drink and can't control it you find yourself making stupid mistakes like stirring up attention between people. **People and social stigma**  When people drink it causes them to make a fool of themselves and do inappropriate thing that people view them differently. Their behavior changes like they become very sober and can't control how they act it draws attention. sometimes alcohol will put you to sleep if you drink to much and so people may take advantage of you. If you are in a big crowd of people and you not acting like yourself people and people start to show no respect for you if you don't respect yourself. = Introduction = = = Late at night two cars where scurrying down the road then at a speed of 100mph both drivers were drunk and sober and highly intoxicated little did they know they were so close that they collided into each other. My thoughts about drunk driving are unquestionable you shouldn't do it because it causes harm to you and to other people you have to live with the experience of being in a car accident and risking your life or someone else. When you are drunk it is hard for your brain to function it takes twenty-four hours for the alcohol to wear off and get rid off. Most people think coffee will help negative. But alcohol hurt you life and they should keep drunk drivers off the road so we can have less accidents and more careful drivers. = Human Pargraph = **What does it means to be human it mean that we have the right to be creative and use our mind because a mind is a terrible thing to waste and I thing being human and having a mind of our own is a great gift you can say what you want and remember important things. Humans can predict what will happen we use foresight which help us predict the future and see what happen before it happens. most human can also see through other human and what I mean by that is when you meet some one you can figure them out by their personality and the way they approach you. We have control over our body because we know when to use the bathroom and if we are put in a bad situation then we know the right choice to make. Our imagination is important because we can draw pictures that are worth thousand words and describe what is it an why was it drawn. People use vehicles to travel to get to work and home it is a very good thing that we can use car so we can travel and not walk or use an animal.** = =