Fnu,+Anem

=Anem Fnu's Portfolio =

Dear, Ms. Justice

When I was in your classes, I have learned many things that you have taught me about writing, and I think that my writing is getting better in your class. I will put some of the works that I did in this semester into this portfolios so you would see what I learned throughout this semester and I know that there are more things that I needed to approved.

My weakness, The first things that I am really confused about is when am writing some sentence in a paragraph I always end up putting the punctuation in the wrong places, like when am writing the Essay All About Me. The bell work that we always did first thing that we get into the class is really helpful to me a lot about the punctuation. The second things that always get in my ways in reading the prompt or the book Night is the vocabulary words, they had difficulties to understand especially for me because my English is not that well so I need to work on that.

The most helpful to me about writing the essay in Drunk Drive is that you been teaching us about the Concrete detail and the commentary detail that helped us organized our paragraph. The important part that we been learning in your class is that we know Elie Wiesel he survive the holocaust that the German did to his religion people. I hope in the English III and IV, I would approved more skills in writing so I could be come a good writer. Thank you for teaching us and you're the best teacher.

These portfolio, on top is something i need to aprrove and what i learn, on the bottom is all the thing that i did for this semester.

good student, Anem Fnu

==== Hey, my name is Anem I was born and raise in Vietnam. On 2006 my family had to move to USA, we had to get on an airplane to fly over to USA, that was my first time get on airplane. When I get on Airplane my head felt dizzy because I never get on it before. On that day when we about to go to the America feel really sad because we had to move to the another sate that we don’t know of, and me and my family really miss our friend and relative back in Vietnam so moving to different sate was sad for me. Me and my family came from Vietnam. Me and my family came from Vietnam but we are different from them because we spoke different languages, the American called our people Montagnards Degar Foundation. I have a lot of sibling, their names are : Anunh, Anem that’s me, rut, Rung,Margreat, and Levi so there are 6 of us include our parent. On free time I like to play soccer which is my best sport with my friend and get on computer. My favorite actor in movie is Bruce Lee because his good at everything in fighting. My favorite artiste in music is Eminem and LiL Wayne. That is all about me. ====

This I Believe Essay (9/16/11)
This is an essay about what I believe in. There are many type things that I believe in, but I only have to choose the best one of them. I believe in internet and there might be some people that believe in different thing and have to write about it. I choose internet because people used it everyday lives. Internet is a very helpful to all the people that used it on their computer. They can do and search many thing that help them with there needs. Internet and computer is very important to the worlds with there technology works. Some people might used internet with their home work, like when the teacher told them some important words or vocabulary words that they don’t understand they can go on internet and look up on Wikipedia and encyclopedia to define it. People can used internet to do different things like communicate with there friend on internet without meeting them in person, they can also communicate with other people in different state or country. People around the worlds can depend on computer with internet on it. This is how I feel when I got an internet in my computer, when I first bought the computer I dint really know anything about it and I don't even know that you need an internet to used it. Until one day my friend told me that my computer need an internet to play, so me and my dad went to the sudden link,and ask them if they can put an internet in my computer so they did. When I fist get on internet I dint know what to do and what to search for because back in Vietnam where I usually live we don’t have a computer and internet so that why I don’t really know how to used it. When i try to search for my favorite music in internet on YouTube it show out everything, I was really surprised at it and excited to listen all my favorite music. After that I ask him if internet can communicate each other and he said yes and he show me the website where you can communicate, its called facebook,yahoo,and hi5.it was really cool that you can chat to other person but you have to sign up so that your friend can knows who you are. There are also many website where you can order stuff like E bays you can order many thing and it will ship it right through your house. internet can do many fast and easy ways you want its to be. I think those people that has not have an internet in there homes should try to put its on after you did, you can feel like you want to search more and more stuff. You will like its just like I do.

Night Chapter 3 Summary (10/7/11)
They left everything behind them but to bought nothing, the officer told them that the men go to the left and the women to the right at that time Eli had never seen his mother and sister again. The old prisoner asked eli and his father how old they are but Eli was to young so the prisoner fix it because the German only want the healthy and could work. Then the officer split them again eli was with his father because the old prisoner help them with their age. Eli could see that they are burning flames in front of them, the Nazis thrown babies,children,and other mores. Eli was saved from the fire, the officer told them to go to barrack to be dress up for work. They all were force to work and they went into so many different barrack to work, if they don’t work the Nazis would send them into the crematory. Eli and his father went to th opens door and they saw the danger sign of electric wire bolt. After that the officer, police with dogs and with machine gin surrounded them. When they about to go to bed they all were to run more until they meet a young pole man in another barrack, so the pole man began telling them something and then they went of to bed. In the afternoon they were to line up and each person to brought to the table ,the veterans had a needle in there and they were to put number in each prisoner so eli number was A-7713.

Effects of Drunk Driving Essay (10/28/11)
I know one of my cousin he was about 28, he went to his friend birthday party it's very far away. Whenever he got there his friend always want him to drink an alcohol, he stay there until night. At midnight at 12:45 pm. or something he try to go home from the birthday party but he was really drunk, when he got into the car he drove half way to his house and the other car hit his car, after that his car was really mess up but he got lucky he dint die he only injury. The police came to see the car and the person who drove it, when the police check my cousin they place him into the car and put him into the jail because he was really drunk, until then he called us and we went to get him. Drunk droving is a very dangerous things to do when you're drunk. When you get into an accident there might be a lot of negative things going to happened in your life especially when you are drunk and you drove. The most three important effect of drunk drive are accident, death and prison. The most problem that people had with driving car is when they're drunk drive it can cause an accidents. There are many people in this world that got into an car accident, but some accidents always happen with drunk and drive. When the drivers got into a accident they can have a lot of negative things in their life like they can have a criminal record, repair the car and more. Having accidents is such a scary thing and if you drive drunk you know whats gonna happen to you. Polices can take your license when you got into accident on someone else car while you're drunk. They can also go to jail for what they did wrong by not following the laws rules. Here is an example of how accidents really can happened to you if you drunk and drive. Jacques was girl she is 20 years old, her friend and her just got back from her friend birthday party but all of them were drunk. Reggie was droving a Oldsmobile while his friend at the back seat and he and jacqui seat at the front passenger seat, they had an accidents two of jacqui friend died and two were rescue jacqui was very lucky she didn’t died when the car were burned. When people got into an accidents in drunk drive, deaths is always happened. “there were 17,448 drunken driving deaths in 2001, up from 16,572 in 1999. the last time MADD conducted its “Rating the States” survey. That is a lot of number who had has an accidents in a past few years. When you drunk drive you don’t know if you going to be alive or death but its depend on how you drove your car. You can also got yourselves killed if you drove at night and you are drunk by hitting something in your way. here is an example of how death can really happened when you drunk and drive, when you drive at night you can feel your head is dizzy because your are really drunk and you cant see nothing but theirs a girl walking down on street and you killed her that's going to be trouble for you. There are many places that you can end up when you drunk, police can find someone drunk driving anywhere. When the police catch that person they always take them to jail to keep them safe from getting into accident. If there's an accident occur police always came to see whose right and who's wrong, if the guy that is wrong they have to be sent into jail by broken the laws. When they put you in jail the police had to decided how much you, or your relative have to pay in order to gets you out of the jail. Police can put that guys in the prison longer if they have murder a person by drunk driving in a car. Drunk and drive can cost a human life to the people that are not drunk and you purposely killed it them, that can make you stay in the prison the rest of your life. Prison is where people go when they are not following the laws, like when you drunk and you drive. Example, Caroline Meeking is a women who is facing a jail for killing her husband, Alan in a car crash during a drunk drive. Those are some of the thing that can happened to you but there is more that can happened. Droving drunk can put your life at risk and everybody else in the car and on the road. I have to wrote this essay to maybe save a life if it was understandable for the reader. I hope that the reader will pass this information about drunk driving to the next, so they would know about when you drunk there can be always something happened. If the Alcohol was not exist the people wouldn’t have an accident, death, prison and high insurance. Accident, death, and prison are the most important effect in this essay.